Lettre D'acceptation De Promotion Simplifiée

Mark promotion acceptance letter

hi good see again it's great my son the recruitment guy I made my officer ultrachrome in North London and I thought I just tell you some it's just literally happened right now so ladies been for a job interview and she's been offered the position fantastic the client has sent her an offer letter and we fought it before to really quickly and again she's thrilled and I suggested it might be a nice idea for her to confirm back to the client her acceptance I said to her just copy me in with you thankfully she did copy me in so I quickly picked up the phone told her to stop straightaway wait for me to email her back so what's the problem the problem is that whilst her grammar and a spelling were pretty good because of course we assess them a tortured the actual way she constructed the letter was really bad now she's only youngster I get that however this client is looking for her to use templated letters to send their clients and of course you can follow the template but I'm sure the client would have been a little bit concerned if he'd seen this first attempt that she'd made to write them a letter of acceptance so I did was I went back and I just laid out the basic bones which is that you would have the employer's name and the company of the top on the left hand side and then over here of course we've got the date and underneath and she's got it wrong in terms of the way she expressed herself she just put your ad at rather than dear Adam so I wrote down for dear Adam I went on to explain why she was happy to accept the job the starting date she confirmed the salary she was looking forward to joining particularly for a certain reason because it's new technology they're using and then of course she responded yours sincerely and that's the role you should have sir and sincerely it's either it's dear Graham and yours sincerely or kind regards perhaps if it's this sir you must have sincerely so two S's never together and then of course at the bottom her name her dress her email telephone no this is basic stuff and maybe I'm being a bit old-fashioned in my 50s but my employer my client that's recruiting is also in his 50s and therefore are thinking have been somewhat shocked if he received this fairly lightweight letter acceptance so thank goodness I stopped but I just thought I should pass on if you are sending an acceptance letter to anybody for a job or any opportunity either get somebody I would like me to look at it or just review it properly make sure you structure is right that's it that's the end of the lesson today see you later bye for now