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CHAPTER FOURTEEN
Speaking to
Inform
Types of Informative
Speeches: Analysis and
Organization
Speeches About
Speeches About
Speeches About
Speeches About
Objects
Processes
Events
Concepts
Guidelines for Informative
Speaking
Don’t Overestimate What the
Audience Knows
Relate the Subject Directly to
the Audience
Don’t Be Too Technical
Avoid Abstractions
Personalize Your Ideas
Sample Speech with
Commentary
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Chapter Focus
This chapter introduces
students to the task of
sharing information
accurately, clearly, and
engagingly. After exploring
four major kinds of speeches
to inform, it presents five
guidelines for successful
informative discourse. It
concludes by reprinting a full
sample speech with
commentary to help
students construct their own
informative speeches. For a
complete outline of the
chapter, see the Instructor’s
Manual, pp. 296–299.
informative speech
A speech designed to
convey knowledge and
understanding.
atalya Petrovich is the advertising manager for a company that sells computer
equipment such as routers, network cards, and wireless extensions. She began that particular workday by meeting with her staff to discuss the company’s
new line of network cards. She pointed out the special features of each piece of equipment, explained what other equipment was compatible with each, and answered
questions about them.
Later that morning, Natalya had a long talk with the head of the company’s technical division. “Can you show me,” she asked, “how to use the new router we’re developing? I need to double-check the ad copy my staff has drafted.” Natalya then took
notes as the head of the technical division went through the uses of the new router.
Natalya also asked questions along the way to make sure she understood exactly how
the router worked.
In the afternoon, Natalya met with the company’s president and sales director
to go over the current year’s budget for her department, as well as her projections for the new fiscal year. She reviewed advertising campaigns and sales data,
assessed the performance of each member of her staff, and then presented her
projections of staffing requirements for the next eighteen months. Afterward, the
president complimented Natalya for giving such a clear presentation. “Anyone who
can communicate that well,” the president said, “is going to go a long way in this
company.”
Natalya doesn’t consider herself a “public speaker,” but much of her job involves absorbing and communicating information clearly and effectively. Although Natalya is just a single person, her experience is not unusual. In one
survey, graduates from five U.S. colleges were asked to rank the speech skills
most important to their jobs. They rated informative speaking number one.
In another survey, 62 percent of the respondents said they used informative
speaking “almost constantly.”1
Public speaking to inform occurs in a wide range of everyday situations. What kinds of people make informative speeches? The business
manager explaining next year’s budget. The architect reviewing plans for
a new building. The military officer briefing subordinates. The union
leader informing members about details of a new contract. The church
worker outlining plans for a fund drive. The teacher in a classroom. There
are endless situations in which people need to inform others. Competence
in this form of communication will prove valuable to you throughout
your life.
One of your first classroom assignments probably will be to deliver an
informative speech in which you will act as a lecturer or teacher. You may
describe an object, show how something works, report on an event, explain
a concept. Your aim will be to convey knowledge and understanding—not
to advocate a cause. Your speech will be judged in light of three general
criteria:
Is the information communicated accurately?
Is the information communicated clearly?
Is the information made meaningful and interesting to the audience?
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In this chapter, we will look at four types of informative speeches and
the basic principles of informative speaking. Along the way, we will apply
various general principles discussed in previous chapters.
Types of Informative Speeches:
Analysis and Organization
There are many ways to classify informative speeches. Here we focus on the
four kinds of informative speeches you are most likely to give in your speech
class: (1) speeches about objects, (2) speeches about processes, (3) speeches
about events, and (4) speeches about concepts. These are not hard-and-fast
categories, but they provide an effective method of analyzing and organizing informative speeches.
Speeches About Objects
As the word is used here, “objects” include anything that is visible, tangible,
and stable in form. Objects may have moving parts or be alive; they may
include places, structures, animals, even people. Here are examples of subjects for speeches about objects:
Sitting Bull
stock market
the human eye
Elizabeth Cady Stanton
seaweed
digital music players
comic strips
Anything that is visible,
tangible, and stable in form.
Mars Rover
Grand Canyon
object
U.S. Army
You will not have time to tell your classmates everything about any of
these subjects. Instead, you will choose a specific purpose that focuses on
one aspect of your subject. Working from the topics presented above, the
following are examples of good specific purpose statements for informative
speeches about objects:
To inform my audience about the social functions of comic strips.
To inform my audience about the geological features of the Grand Canyon.
To inform my audience about the role of Elizabeth Cady Stanton in the U.S.
women’s rights movement.
To inform my audience what to look for when buying a digital music player.
To inform my audience about the commercial uses of seaweed.
Notice how precise these statements are. As we saw in Chapter 4, you
should select a specific purpose that is not too broad to achieve in the allotted
time. “To inform my audience about Pablo Picasso” is far too general for a
classroom speech. “To inform my audience about the major contributions of
Cross-Reference
See Chapter 4 for full discussion of selecting speech topics and developing specific
purpose statements.
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Pablo Picasso to modern art” is more exact and is a purpose you could
reasonably hope to achieve in a brief talk.
If your specific purpose is to explain the history or evolution of your
subject, you will put your speech in chronological order. For example:
Specific Purpose: To inform my audience about the major achievements
of Frederick Douglass.
Central Idea:
Main Points:
Teaching Tip
Make sure that students
understand the informative
speech assignment and that
they do not confuse it with
speaking to persuade. Although every speech has the
potential to persuade depending on how it is interpreted by the audience, there
is, in most cases, a sharp
difference between a speech
designed to convey knowledge and understanding and
one designed to change listeners’ attitudes, beliefs, or
actions. For more on the
differences between informative and persuasive
speeches, see the Teaching
Tip on p. 376.
Although born in slavery, Frederick Douglass became
one of the greatest figures in American history.
I. Douglass spent the first 20 years of his life as a
slave in Maryland.
II. After escaping to the North, Douglass became a
leader in the abolitionist movement to end slavery.
III. During the Civil War, Douglass helped establish
black regiments in the Union Army.
IV. After the war, Douglass was a tireless champion of
equal rights for his race.
If your specific purpose is to describe the main features of your subject,
you may organize your speech in spatial order:
Specific Purpose: To inform my audience about the differences among
the five major Hawaiian Islands.
Central Idea:
The five major Hawaiian islands run from Kauai in the
northwest to Hawaii in the southeast.
Main Points:
I. The northernmost of the major islands, Kauai
averages 485 inches of rain a year, making it one of
the wettest spots on Earth.
II. Southeast of Kauai is Oahu, home of Honolulu and
the most heavily populated of all the islands.
III. Located 26 miles from Oahu, Molokai is known for
its friendliness and its large population of native
Hawaiians.
IV. Eight miles to the southeast of Oahu lies Maui,
famous for its spectacular landscapes, white sandy
beaches, and crystal-clear water.
V. The southernmost major island is Hawaii, known
as the Big Island, which is twice as large as all the
other islands put together.
As often as not, you will find that speeches about objects fall into topical
order. Here is an example:
Specific Purpose: To inform my audience about the major alternative-fuel
cars now being developed.
Central Idea:
The major alternative-fuel cars now being developed
are powered by electricity, natural gas, methanol, or
hydrogen.
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I. One kind of alternative-fuel car is powered by
electricity.
II. A second kind of alternative-fuel car is powered by
natural gas.
III. A third kind of alternative-fuel car is powered by
methanol.
IV. A fourth kind of alternative-fuel car is powered by
hydrogen.
No matter which of these organizational methods you use—chronological,
spatial, or topical—be sure to follow the guidelines discussed in Chapter 8:
(1) limit your speech to between two and five main points; (2) keep main
points separate; (3) try to use the same pattern of wording for all main points;
(4) balance the amount of time devoted to each main point.
Cross-Reference
See Chapter 8 for full discussion of methods and guidelines for organizing the main
points of a speech.
Speeches About Processes
A process is a systematic series of actions that leads to a specific result or
product. Speeches about processes explain how something is made, how
something is done, or how something works. Here are examples of good specific purpose statements for speeches about processes:
To inform my audience how hurricanes develop.
process
A systematic series of
actions that leads to a
specific result or product.
To inform my audience how to write an effective job resumé.
To inform my audience how to save people from drowning.
To inform my audience how oriental rugs are made.
To inform my audience how to perform Pilates exercises.
As these examples suggest, there are two kinds of informative speeches
about processes. One kind explains a process so that listeners will understand it better. Your goal in this kind of speech is to have your audience know the steps of the process and how they relate to one another. If
your specific purpose is “To inform my audience how underwater robots
work,” you will explain the basic tasks and mechanisms of underwater
robots. You will not instruct your listeners on how they can operate an
underwater robot.
A second kind of speech explains a process so listeners will be better
able to perform the process themselves. Your goal in this kind of speech is
to have the audience learn a particular skill. Suppose your specific purpose
is “To inform my audience how to take pictures like a professional photographer.” You will present the basic techniques of professional photography
and show your listeners how they can utilize those techniques. You want
the audience to be able to use the techniques as a result of your speech.
Both kinds of speeches about processes may require visual aids. At
the very least, you should prepare a chart outlining the steps or techniques of your process. In some cases you will need to demonstrate the
steps or techniques by performing them in front of your audience. One
student did sleight-of-hand magic tricks to show the techniques behind
Teaching Tip
Some instructors require that
students choose a single
topic for both the informative and persuasive speeches.
In the informative speech,
students provide background
information about the topic;
in the persuasive speech,
they advocate a policy with
regard to the same topic.
Such an approach eliminates
the need for students to
spend time selecting two
speech topics, and it allows
them to research a single
topic in more depth than
would otherwise be the case.
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Teaching Tip
Students sometimes propose
topics for informative
speeches about events or
concepts that would be
more suitable for a persuasive speech on a question of
fact. “To inform my audience
of the scientific evidence
supporting the existence of
intelligent extraterrestrial
life” is an acceptable specific
purpose statement for an
informative speech as long as
the evidence presented in
the speech is truly scientific.
In contrast, “To inform my
audience about the existence
of intelligent extraterrestrial
life” is not appropriate for an
informative speech. Why?
Because there is no consensus in the scientific community about the existence of
intelligent extraterrestrial
life. Some experts believe in
such life; others do not. Because the facts of the matter
are so hotly contested, this
subject would be better
treated as a persuasive
speech on a question of fact,
with the specific purpose
statement “To persuade my
audience that there is intelligent extraterrestrial life in
the universe.” For full discussion of persuasive speeches
on questions of fact, see
Chapter 15, pp. 406–409.
them. Another acted out the basic methods of mime. Yet another executed
elementary tai chi maneuvers. In each case, the demonstration not only
clarified the speaker’s process, but captivated the audience as well. (If you
are using visual aids of any kind, be sure to review Chapter 13 before
your speech.)
When informing about a process, you will usually arrange your speech
in chronological order, explaining the process step by step from beginning
to end. For example:
Specific Purpose: To inform my audience about the major rituals of a
traditional Bengali wedding in India.
Central Idea:
A traditional Bengali wedding consists of a series of
rituals that take place before the wedding, during the
wedding ceremony, and after the wedding.
Main Points:
I. Pre-wedding rituals include offering reverence to
the ancestors of the bride and groom, giving gifts
to the bride and groom, and dressing the bride in
traditional fashion.
II. Rituals during the wedding ceremony include an
exchange of garlands between the bride and groom,
the chanting of mantras, and the giving away of
the bride by her uncle.
III. Post-wedding rituals include a celebration at the
home of the bride’s family, a reception at the home
of the groom’s family, and the formal exit of the
bride and groom to their nuptial quarters.
Sometimes, rather than leading your audience through a process step
by step, you will focus on the major principles or techniques involved in
performing the process. Then you will organize your speech in topical order. Each main point will deal with a separate principle or technique. For
example:
Specific Purpose: To inform my audience of the common methods used
by stage magicians to perform their tricks.
Central Idea:
Stage magicians use two common methods to perform
their tricks—mechanical devices and sleight of hand.
Main Points:
I. Many magic tricks rely on mechanical devices that
may require little skill by the magician.
II. Other magic tricks depend on the magician’s
skill in fooling people by sleight-of-hand
manipulation.
Concise organization is especially important in speeches about
processes. You must make sure each step in the process is clear and easy
to follow. If your process has more than four or five steps, group the steps
into units so as to limit the number of main points. Otherwise, you will
have too many main points for listeners to grasp and recall. For example,
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Informative speeches can be
organized in many ways.
A speech on the growth of
modern art would likely
be in chronological order,
while a speech on the
techniques of painting
would fall into topical
order.
in a speech explaining how to set up a home aquarium, a student presented
the following main points:
I.
II.
III.
IV.
V.
VI.
VII.
VIII.
IX.
X.
XI.
XII.
First you must choose the size of your tank.
Then you must determine the shape of your tank.
You must also decide how much you can afford to pay for a tank.
Once you have the tank, you need a filter system.
A heater is also absolutely necessary.
You must also get an air pump.
Once this is done, you need to choose gravel for the tank.
You will also need plants.
Other decorations will round out the effects of your aquarium.
Now you are ready to add the fish.
Freshwater fish are the most common.
Saltwater fish are more expensive and require special care.
Not surprisingly, this was too much for the audience to follow. The speaker
should have organized the points something like this:
I. The first step in establishing a home aquarium is choosing a tank.
A. The size of the tank is important.
B. The shape of the tank is important.
C. The cost of the tank is important.
II. The second step in establishing a home aquarium is equipping the tank.
A. You will need a filter system.
B. You will need a heater.
C. You will need an air pump.
D. You will need gravel.
Class Activity
It is crucial that students understand the importance of
limiting the number of main
points in an informative
speech about a process. For
a helpful activity on this subject, see Applying the Power
of Public Speaking at the end
of this chapter. For discussion of the activity, see the
Instructor’s Manual,
pp. 303–304.
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E. You will need plants.
F. You may also want other decorations.
III. The third step in establishing a home aquarium is adding the fish.
A. Freshwater fish are the most common for home aquariums.
B. Saltwater fish are more expensive and require special care.
As you can see, the subpoints cover the same territory as that originally covered by the twelve main points. But three main points are much easier to
understand and remember than twelve.
Speeches About Events
event
Anything that happens or is
regarded as happening.
The Random House Dictionary defines an event as “anything that happens
or is regarded as happening.” By this definition, the following are examples
of suitable subjects for informative speeches about events:
Holocaust
civil rights movement
Paralympics
figure skating
job interviews
Cinco de Mayo
tsunamis
attention deficit disorder
Speech Assignment
There are many possible approaches to the informative
speech assignment, one of
which is to have students explain a significant aspect of a
culture other than their own.
For an explanation of such an
assignment, see the Instructor’s Manual, p. 34. For a
more involved approach that
combines attention to cultural
diversity with small-group discussion and informative
speaking, see Kimberly A.
Powell, “Increasing Appreciation for Diversity Through
the Group Culture Speech,”
in Selections from the Speech
Communication Teacher,
1994–1996, pp. 28–29, which
accompanies The Art of Public
Speaking.
mountain climbing
Battle of Little Big Horn
As usual, you will need to narrow your focus and pick a specific purpose you can accomplish in a short speech. Here are examples of good specific purpose statements for informative speeches about events:
To inform my audience about the equipment used in mountain climbing.
To inform my audience of the festivities at Mexico’s Cinco de Mayo celebration.
To inform my audience about what happened at the Battle of Little Big Horn.
To inform my audience about the techniques of therapeutic massage.
To inform my audience about the experience of working on an
archaeological dig.
As you can see, there are many ways to discuss events. If your specific
purpose is to recount the history of an event, you will organize your speech
in chronological order, relating the incidents one after another in the order
they occurred. For example:
Specific Purpose: To inform my audience about the history of the
Paralympics.
Central Idea:
Main Points:
Olympic-style games for athletes with physical
disabilities have made great strides since the first
competition almost 60 years ago.
I. What would eventually become the Paralympics
began in 1948 with a sports competition in Great
Britain involving World War II veterans with spinal
cord injuries.
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Connection
Do you need quick access to facts about your informative speech
topic? Log on to the Internet Public Library’s Subject Collection
(www.ipl.org/div/subject/), which offers links to a wide range of
high-quality resources chosen for their accurate and reliable information.
If you are giving an informative speech on a topic with multicultural
dimensions, you may find the following Web sites useful:
Yahoo! Regional (http://dir.yahoo.com/Regional/)
ONLINE LEARNING CENTER
You can link to these Web sites at
www.mhhe.com/lucas9.
WWW Virtual Library: American Indians (www.hanksville.org/
NAresources)
Asian American Studies Resources (www.sunysb.edu/library/
eresources/www/asian.html)
Latino/Hispanic Resources (www-rcf.usc.edu/~cmmr/Latino.html)
African American Web Connection (www.aawc.com)
II. In 1952 the event took on an international
flavor when athletes from the Netherlands took
part.
III. The first official Paralympic Games for international athletes with disabilities took place in
Rome in 1960.
IV. In 2001 an agreement was signed allowing for the
Paralympic Games to be held alongside both the
summer and winter Olympic Games.
Instead of recounting the history of an event, you might take a more analytical approach and explain its causes and/or effects. In such a case, you
will organize your speech in causal order. Let’s say your specific purpose
is “To inform my audience why so many lives were lost when a major
tsunami hit Southeast Asia in 2004.” Working from cause to effect, your outline might look like this:
Specific Purpose: To inform my audience why so many lives were lost
when a major tsunami hit Southeast Asia in 2004.
Central Idea:
On December 26, 2004, a catastrophic tsunami hit
unexpectedly and took the lives of more than 200,000
people caught near the seashore.
Main Points:
I. There were two major causes for the great loss of
life when the tsunami struck.
A. Many resorts and fishing villages were built
directly on the beach.
B. There was no warning system for tsunamis in
that part of the world.
Speech Assignment
For a different kind of informative speech assignment, have students inform
their classmates about a
prominent public speaker,
either contemporary or historical. Although I have used
this assignment most frequently for the final speech
of the term, the speech can
be reduced in length and
complexity so as to be appropriate earlier. For fuller
explanation, see the Instructor’s Manual, p. 37.
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II. The effects of these two situations were disastrous.
A. There was no time for people to escape to
higher ground.
B. Thousands of people who were vacationing,
living, or working on the beach were swept away.
Teaching Tip
Many instructors require that
students use a visual aid in
the informative speech—
regardless of whether the
speech is about a process, an
object, a concept, or an
event. Not only does this
ensure that all students gain
experience using a visual
aid in at least one of their
speeches, it also increases
audience interest, reduces
the speaker’s nervousness,
and encourages extemporaneous delivery. For full
discussion of visual aids,
see Chapter 13.
There are other ways to deal with an event besides telling what
happened or why it happened. Indeed, you can approach an event from
almost any angle or combination of angles—features, origins, implications, benefits, future developments, and so forth. In such cases, you will
put your speech together in topical order. And you should make sure
your main points subdivide the subject logically and consistently. For
instance:
Specific Purpose: To inform my audience about the four traditional
events in women’s gymnastics.
Central Idea:
The four traditional events in women’s gymnastics are
floor exercise, vault, balance beam, and uneven
parallel bars.
Main Points:
I. The floor exercise combines dancing, acrobatics,
and tumbling.
II. The vault features explosive strength and dramatic
midair maneuvers.
III. The balance beam requires precise routines and
perfect coordination.
IV. The uneven parallel bars demand great strength,
flexibility, and agility.
Speeches About Concepts
concept
A belief, theory, idea,
notion, principle, or the like.
Concepts include beliefs, theories, ideas, principles, and the like. They are
more abstract than objects, processes, or events. The following are some examples of subjects for speeches about concepts:
Confucianism
film theory
philosophies of education
principles of feminism
original-intent doctrine
existentialism
concepts of science
theories of psychology
religious beliefs
international law
Taking a few of these general subjects, here are some specific purpose
statements for speeches about concepts:
To inform my audience about the basic principles of Confucianism.
To inform my audience about the doctrine of original intent in constitutional
interpretation.
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The principles of
informative speaking are
applicable to a wide range
of situations. Knowing those
principles will help you
whenever you need to
convey knowledge and
understanding.
To inform my audience about the different philosophies of education in Europe
and the United States.
To inform my audience about the concept of patriarchy in feminist thought.
To inform my audience about the major principles of film theory.
Speeches about concepts are usually organized in topical order. One
common approach is to enumerate the main features or aspects of your concept. For example:
Specific Purpose: To inform my audience about the basic principles of
nonviolent resistance.
Central Idea:
The basic principles of nonviolent resistance stress
using moral means to achieve social change, refusing
to inflict violence on one’s enemies, and using
suffering as a social force.
Main Points:
I. The first major principle of nonviolent resistance is
that social change must be achieved by moral
means.
II. The second major principle of nonviolent
resistance is that one should not inflict violence on
one’s enemies.
III. The third major principle of nonviolent resistance
is that suffering can be a powerful social force.
A more complex approach is to define the concept you are dealing with,
identify its major elements, and illustrate it with specific examples. An
Speech Assignment
Providing clear explanations
of complex ideas is one of
the most difficult challenges
facing a public speaker. For a
valuable exploration of this
aspect of informative speaking, see Katherine Rowan,
“The Speech to Explain Difficult Ideas,” in Selections from
the Speech Communication
Teacher 1986–1991,
pp. 69–71, which accompanies The Art of Public
Speaking.
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excellent instance of this came in a student speech about Islam:
Specific Purpose: To inform my audience of the basic principles of Islam.
Central Idea:
Main Points:
Overhead Transparency
For ease of classroom discussion, examples of specific
purpose statements, central
ideas, and main points for
all four kinds of informative
speeches discussed in this
chapter are included in the
binder of full-color overhead
transparencies that accompanies The Art of Public Speaking.
The beliefs of Islam can be traced to the prophet
Muhammad, are written in the Koran, and have
produced a number of sects.
I. Islam was founded by the prophet Muhammad in
the early 600s.
II. The teachings of Islam are written in the Koran,
the holy book of Islam.
III. Today Islam is divided into a number of sects, the
largest of which are the Sunnis and the Shiites.
Yet another approach is to explain competing schools of thought about
the same subject. For example:
Specific Purpose: To inform my audience of the major arguments for and
against homeschooling.
CD 1:VIDEO 14.1
Supporters and opponents of homeschooling both have
legitimate arguments.
Main Points:
View an excerpt from “Feng Shui.”
Central Idea:
I. Supporters of homeschooling argue that parents are
the best judge of the values and academic subjects
their children should be taught.
II. Opponents of homeschooling argue that society
requires all children to learn a common set of
academic subjects and civic values.
As you can see from these examples, speeches about concepts are often
more complex than other kinds of informative speeches. Concepts are abstract and can be very hard to explain to someone who is learning about
them for the first time. When explaining concepts, pay special attention to
avoiding technical language, to defining terms clearly, and to using examples
and comparisons to illustrate the concepts and make them understandable
to your listeners.
Look, for example, at CD 1, Video 14.1, which presents an excerpt from
a student speech about the ancient Chinese art of feng shui. Notice how
clearly the student defines feng shui and then explains the concept of chi,
which is the most important factor in feng shui. If you give an informative
speech about a concept, give special thought to how you can make that
concept clear and comprehensible to your listeners.
The lines dividing speeches about objects, processes, events, and concepts are not absolute. Some subjects could fit into more than one category,
depending on how you develop the speech. You could treat the Declaration
of Independence as an object—by explaining its history and its role in the
American Revolution. Or you could deal with the meaning of the Declaration, in which case you would be speaking about a concept—an idea bound
up with freedom and democracy.
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To take another example, a speech about the destruction of ancient
Pompeii by the eruption of Mount Vesuvius would probably deal with its
subject as an event, but a speech on what causes volcanoes to erupt would
most likely treat its subject as a process. The important step is to decide
how you will handle your subject—as an object, a process, an event, or a
concept. Once you do that, you can develop the speech accordingly.
One final word about organizing your informative speech: Regardless of
which method of organization you use, be sure to give your listeners plenty
of help in sorting out facts and ideas during the speech. One way is by using
enough transitions, internal previews, internal summaries, and signposts
(see Chapter 8). Another way is to follow the old maxim: “Tell ’em what
you’re going to say; say it; then tell ’em what you’ve said.” In other words,
preview the main points of your speech in the introduction, and summarize them in the conclusion. This will make your speech not only easier to
understand but also easier to remember.
Guidelines for Informative Speaking
All the previous chapters of this book relate to the principles of informative speaking. Choosing a topic and specific purpose, analyzing the audience, gathering materials, choosing supporting details, organizing the
speech, using words to communicate meaning, delivering the speech—all
of these must be done effectively if your informative speech is to be a success.
Here we emphasize five points that will help you avoid the mistakes that
plague many informative speakers.
Don’t Overestimate What the Audience Knows
In a speech about meteorology, a student said, “If modern methods of
weather forecasting had existed in 1900, the Galveston hurricane disaster
would never have taken place.” Then he was off to other matters, leaving
his listeners to puzzle over what the Galveston hurricane was, when it
happened, and what kind of destruction it wreaked.
The speaker assumed that the audience already knew these things. But
his classmates were not experts on meteorology or on American history.
Even those who had heard of the hurricane had only a fuzzy notion of it.
Some were not even sure about the location of Galveston. Only the speaker
knew that the hurricane, which killed more than 6,000 people when it
unexpectedly struck Galveston, Texas, on September 8, 1900, is still the
deadliest natural disaster in American history.
As many speakers have discovered, it is easy to overestimate the audience’s stock of information. In most informative speeches, your listeners will be only vaguely knowledgeable (at best) about the details of your
topic. (Otherwise, there would not be much need for an informative
speech!) Therefore, you must lead your listeners step by step, without any
shortcuts. You cannot assume they will know what you mean. Rather,
you must be sure to explain everything so thoroughly that they cannot
help but understand. As you work on your speech, always consider
Class Activity
Divide the class into small
groups and have them work
on the first Exercise for Critical Thinking at the end of
this chapter. This exercise
gives students practice in developing specific purpose
statements for informative
speeches and helps them
distinguish among informative speeches about objects,
concepts, processes, and
events. For additional discussion of the exercise, see the
Instructor’s Manual, p. 300.
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whether it will be clear to someone who is hearing about the topic for the
first time.
Suppose you are talking about Roth IRAs, a type of individual retirement account approved by Congress in 1998. Although some of your classmates might have heard of Roth IRAs, you cannot assume they have a firm
grasp of the subject. So you should start by telling them what a Roth IRA
is. How will you tell them? Here’s one way:
Introduced in 1998, a Roth IRA is a type of individual retirement account in
which annual contributions are made with after-tax dollars but in which earnings and
distributions are tax-free once the holder of the account is 59.5 years of age or
older.
Class Activity
Divide the class into small
groups. Have each group
select a topic from among
the following:
To someone who knows a lot about economics this is perfectly clear. But
someone who does not will probably get lost along the way. The tone of the
statement is that of a speaker reviewing information already familiar to the
audience—not of a speaker introducing new information.
Here, in contrast, is another explanation of Roth IRAs:
How to tie a shoelace
How to change a car tire
The basic rules of baseball
How to operate a digital
camera
How to program a TiVo
The basic rules of Monopoly
Give each group 15 minutes
to work out a 2-minute explanation designed for an audience that knows absolutely
nothing about the topic.
Each group should select
one of its members to present the explanation orally to
the class. For further discussion of this activity, see the
third Additional Exercise for
Critical Thinking on p. 311
of the Instructor’s Manual.
What is a Roth Individual Retirement Account, or IRA? Let me explain with an
example.
Imagine yourself a few years down the road as a recent college graduate. Your
job pays a good salary, but you’re still concerned with your finances and your future.
After all, everyone keeps telling you to start planning for retirement early.
In addition to Social Security, you have a number of retirement-planning options.
One is the Roth IRA. Suppose you place $4,000 into a Roth IRA every year. Suppose
also that your money grows at an average rate of 8 percent a year.
If you start putting money in at age 25 and withdraw it at age 65, you will have
an account worth more than $1.2 million. Moreover, unlike other retirement accounts,
you won’t have to pay taxes on your $1.2 million, even if you take it out all at once.
So you can see why Roth IRAs are so popular. You win both ways—your money
grows tax-free and it is free of taxes when you withdraw it.
This statement is clear and simple. Its tone is that of a teacher unraveling
a new subject.
Is it too simple? Will your classmates feel as if you are talking down to
them? Almost certainly not. Many students hesitate to speak simply because
they are afraid they will sound simpleminded. They think they need big
words and complicated sentences to sound intelligent. But nothing could
be farther from the truth. The test of a good speaker is to communicate even
the most complex ideas clearly and simply. Anyone can go to a book and
find a learned-sounding definition of a Roth IRA like the one above. But to
say in plain English what a Roth IRA is—that takes hard work and creative
thinking.
Also, remember that readers can study a printed passage again and again
until they extract its meaning, but listeners don’t have that luxury. They
must understand what you say in the time it takes you to say it. The more
you assume they know about the topic, the greater your chances of being
misunderstood.
If you have circulated a questionnaire among your listeners before the
speech (see Chapter 5, pages 128–131), you should have a good idea of their
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Whether in the classroom or
out, effective informative
speakers work on
communicating their ideas
in clear, nontechnical
language that relates the
topic to their listeners’
knowledge and interests.
knowledge about the topic. If not, you will usually do better to aim for the
low end of the knowledge spectrum. Some experts recommend preparing a
speech as if the audience had never heard of the subject. That may be a bit
extreme, but it is one way to make sure you define every special term, clarify every idea, illustrate every concept, and support every conclusion. You
cannot go wrong by following the news reporters’ code: “Never overestimate
the information of your audience; never underestimate the intelligence of
your audience.”
Relate the Subject Directly to the Audience
The British dramatist Oscar Wilde arrived at his club after the disastrous openingnight performance of his new play.
“Oscar, how did your play go?” asked a friend.
“Oh,” Wilde quipped, “the play was a great success, but the audience was a failure.”
Speakers have been known to give much the same answer in saving
face after a dismal informative speech. “Oh,” they say, “the speech was
fine, but the audience just wasn’t interested.” And they are at least partly
right—the audience wasn’t interested. Then was the speech fine? Not by
any objective standard. A speech is measured by its impact on a particular audience. There is no such thing as a fine speech that puts people to
sleep. It is the speaker’s job to get listeners interested—and to keep them
interested.
Informative speakers have one big hurdle to overcome. They must recognize that what is fascinating to them may not be fascinating to everybody.
A mathematician, for example, might be truly enthralled by a perfect equation, but most people wouldn’t want to hear about it. Once you have chosen a topic that could possibly be interesting to your listeners, you should
Class Activity
Once students have settled
on topics for their informative speeches, lead a class
discussion in which students
share their topics with their
classmates. Ask the class how
much they know about each
topic. In most cases, the
class will know considerably
less than the speaker assumes. Lead a brainstorming
session on how the speakers
can relate their topics to the
audience.
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take special steps to relate it to them. You should tie it in with their interests and concerns.
Start in the introduction. Instead of saying,
I want to talk with you about chili peppers,
you could say:
Imagine your mouth burning like wildfire, your eyes squirting out uncontrollable
tears, and your face red and sweating profusely. Are you sick? No. You just took a bite
of a screaming hot chili pepper. Congratulations. You’re partaking in a worldwide tradition that has been spicing up lives and diets for thousands of years.
Get your audience involved right at the beginning. Notice how one student did this in her informative speech about depression. The speaker’s
classmates all knew something about depression as a medical condition, but
the speaker wanted to relate the subject to them on a more personal basis.
She began by saying:
CD 1:VIDEO 14.2
View these excerpts from “The
Hidden World of Chili Peppers”
and “Depression: More Than a Blue
Mood.”
Cross-Reference
See Chapter 5 for a full
discussion of audience
analysis and adaptation.
You feel exhausted, yet you can’t sleep. You have no energy, no hope, and you
get no pleasure from your usual activities. You’re angry and irritable, and you find that
lately you’re spending more and more time alone. You feel like you’re caught in a trap,
and you see no way out.
Have you or someone close to you suffered from these scary feelings? I’d be
surprised if you answered no. These are symptoms of depression, and according
to the National Institute of Mental Health, about 19 percent of adults, or almost 10
million people, become depressed each year. What’s more, symptoms usually begin between ages 15 and 30, making depression a serious concern for college
students.
Don’t stop with the introduction. Whenever you can, put your listeners into the body of the speech. After all, nothing interests people more
than themselves. Don’t just rattle off statistics and concepts as if you were
reciting a shopping list. Find ways to talk about your topic in terms of
your listeners. Bring your material home to them. Get it as close to them
as possible.
Here’s an example. Let’s say you are explaining how people can discover
whether they are “secret southpaws”—that is, people who are naturally lefthanded but who have grown up preferring the right hand because they were
taught to use it as a child. You have plenty of facts and could recite them
like this:
According to Science magazine, half of all people who are naturally left-handed assume they are right-handed because that is the hand they use to eat, to write, and to
play sports. But how can it be determined whether one is a natural southpaw? According to Abram Blau, author of The Master Hand, there are a number of simple tests.
For one thing, most natural left-handers can write spontaneously backward or upside
down with the left hand. For another, when left-handers clasp their hands in front of
themselves, they usually place the left thumb on top. In contrast, when left-handers
grab a broom, they normally place their left hand below the right. Finally, when using
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the right hand, natural left-handers will draw a circle clockwise, while natural righthanders will draw it counterclockwise. People who give a left-handed response on
three or more of these tests may well be secret southpaws.
This is fascinating information, but it is not made fascinating to the audience. Let’s try again:
Just because you use your right hand to eat, to write, and to play sports, you may
assume that you’re naturally right-handed. But, says Science magazine, half of all people who are naturally left-handed grow up using their right hands.
How can you tell if you’re a natural lefty? Dr. Abram Blau, author of The Master
Hand, gives some tests you can try.
First, on a sheet of paper see if you can write backward or upside down with your
left hand. If you are left-handed, you can probably do this spontaneously, without practice or training.
Second, clasp your hands together in front of you. Whichever thumb you place on
top is usually your dominant hand.
Third, grab hold of a broomstick. Odds are you’ll place your dominant hand on
the bottom.
Finally, draw a circle on a piece of paper with your right hand. If you draw it counterclockwise, you’re probably a natural right-hander. But if you draw it clockwise, you’re
probably a natural lefty.
If you test left-handed on three of these tests, there is a good chance you are a secret southpaw.
CD 1:VIDEO 14.3
View these excerpts from “Secret
Southpaws.”
Look at the frequent use of “you” and “your.” The facts are the same,
but now they are pointed directly at the audience. This is the kind of thing
that gets listeners to sit up and pay attention. In addition, research shows
that using personal terms such as “you” and “your” in an informative
speech significantly increases audience understanding of the speaker’s
ideas.2
Don’t Be Too Technical
What does it mean to say that an informative speech is too technical? It
may mean the subject matter is too specialized for the audience. Any subject
can be popularized—but only up to a point. The important thing for a
speaker to know is what can be explained to an ordinary audience and
what cannot.
Say your subject is electronic amplifiers. It’s no trick to demonstrate
how to operate an amplifier (how to turn it on and off, adjust the volume,
set the tone and balance controls). It’s also relatively easy to explain what
an amplifier does (it boosts the sound received from a radio, CD player, or
live performance). But to give a full scientific account of how an amplifier
works—that is another matter. It cannot be done in any reasonable time
unless the audience knows the principles of audio technology. You would
be better off not even trying. The material is just too technical to be
understood by a general audience.
Even when the subject matter is not technical, the language used to
explain it may be. Every activity has its jargon. This is true of golf (bogey,
wedge, match play); of chemistry (colloid, glycogen, heavy water); of
Overhead Transparency
For ease of classroom discussion, the guidelines for informative speaking discussed
on pp. 383–391 are included
in the binder of full-color
overhead transparencies that
accompanies The Art of Public
Speaking.
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jargon
The specialized or technical
language of a trade,
profession, or similar group.
financial analysis (covered call, reverse bid, toehold acquisition); of ballet
(arabesque, jeté, pas de deux). If you are talking to a group of specialists,
you can use technical words and be understood. But you must do all you
can to avoid technical words when informing a general audience such as
your speech class.
You may find this hard to do at first. Many people are so addicted to
the lingo of their subject that they have trouble escaping it. As you give
more speeches, though, you will become increasingly adept at expressing
your ideas in everyday, nontechnical language.
Here, for instance, are two statements explaining the process of cryonics,
which involves freezing people after death in the hope that medical science
will be able to restore them to life in the future. The first is heavily laden
with specialized language that would have little impact on ordinary
listeners:
Options for cryonic suspension include freezing the subject’s head or complete
body. In either case, the process entails complex scientific procedures that, for
maximum functionality, must be implemented immediately upon the cessation of
biological functioning. Measures must be taken to minimize tissue decomposition so
as to ensure that the subject can be successfully resuscitated at some undetermined
future period.
The second statement is perfectly understandable. It is from a student
speech and shows how technical information can be made clear to the
average person:
CD 1:VIDEO 14.4
View this excerpt from “Cryonics.”
Currently, when a person who has signed up to be cryonically suspended dies, a
specific procedure, which was outlined in the book Cryonics: Reaching for Tomorrow,
must be carried out.
First, before death, an individual must decide whether to have his or her entire
body frozen or just the head. If the whole body is to be frozen, it must be preserved
upon death. Immediately after death—ideally within a matter of minutes—the patient
is connected to a heart-lung machine and chemicals such as glucose and heparin are
circulated with the oxygenated blood to help minimize the freezing damage. At the
same time, the patient’s internal temperature is reduced as quickly as possible using
cold packs.
If only the head will be frozen, a slightly different procedure must be carried
out. The head must be surgically detached from the rest of the body and preserved
in a separate container. You may be wondering, “Why would I preserve only my
head?” The answer is, with some diseases the body is in a very poor condition.
If this is the case and you choose to preserve your head only, you do so with the
belief that medical science will be able to create a healthy new body for you in the
future.
Much clearer, isn’t it? The only specialized words in the whole passage are “glucose,” “heparin,” and “oxygenated blood,” and they do
not get in the way. The rest of the language is straightforward, the ideas
easy to grasp. This is what you should strive for in your informative
speeches.
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Avoid Abstractions
“My task,” said the novelist Joseph Conrad, “is, before all, to make you see.”
And make the reader see is just what Conrad did. Witness this passage, in
which Conrad describes the aftermath of an explosion aboard a ship:
The first person I saw was Mahon, with eyes like saucers, his mouth open, and
the long white hair standing straight on end round his head like a silver halo. He was
just about to go down when the sight of the main deck stirring, heaving up, and changing into splinters before his eyes, petrified him on the top step. I stared at him in unbelief,
and he stared at me with a queer kind of shocked curiosity. I did not know that I had
no hair, no eyebrows, no eyelashes, that my young mustache was burnt off, that my
face was black, one cheek laid open, my nose cut, and my chin bleeding.3
A speech is not a novel. Still, too many abstractions are tedious—
whether in a novel or in a speech. Many informative speeches would be
vastly improved by the novelist’s bent for color, specificity, and detail.
One way to avoid abstractions is through description. When we think
of description, we usually think of external events such as the explosion
described by Conrad. But description is also used to communicate internal
feelings. Here is how one student tried to convey to his audience the
sensations he experienced when he first began sky diving:
description
A statement that depicts a
person, event, idea, or the
like with clarity and
vividness.
As we wait for the plane to climb to the jump altitude of 12,000 feet, my mind races
with a frenzied jumble of thoughts: “Okay, this is the moment you’ve been waiting for. It’s
going to be great. Am I really going to jump out of an airplane from 12,000 feet? What if
something goes wrong? Can I still back out? Come on now, don’t worry. It’ll be fine.”
Even if we have not been sky diving, we have all had the same kinds of
emotions on similar occasions. So what happened next?
Now it is time to jump. My palms are sweating and my heart is pounding so hard
I think it may burst. “Get ready,” yells the instructor. As I jump into the blue, I wonder,
“What am I doing here?”
Yes—and then what?
The blast of air resistance blows me backward like a leaf at the mercy of an autumn
wind. In about 10 seconds my body levels out and accelerates to a speed of 120 miles
an hour. The air supports my body like an invisible flying carpet. There is no sound
except for the wind rushing around my face. The earth appears soft and green, rivers
look like strips of silver, and in every direction the scenery forms a panoramic landscape. Any fears or doubts I had are gone in the exhilaration of free flight. Every nerve
in my body is alive with sensation; yet I am overcome by a peaceful feeling and the
sense that I am at one with the sky.
As we listen to the speaker, we are almost up there with him, sharing his
thoughts, feeling his heart pound, joining his exhilaration as he floats
effortlessly through the sky. The vivid description lends reality to the speech
and draws us further in.
Speech Assignment
If you are teaching during an
election year—local, state, or
national—assign a speech in
which students inform their
classmates about the issues
and/or candidates. For one
approach to such an assignment, see Lori A. WaltersKramer, “Preparing for
November,” in Selections from
the Communication Teacher,
2002–2005, pp. 52–53, which
accompanies The Art of Public
Speaking.
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Regardless of the situation,
informative speakers need
to work on relating the
topic directly to their
audience, on avoiding
overly technical language,
and on personalizing their
ideas.
comparison
A statement of the
similarities among two
or more people, events,
ideas, etc.
Another way to escape abstractions is with comparisons that put your
subject in concrete, familiar terms. Do you want to convey what would
happen if a comet or large asteroid struck the earth? You could say this:
If a comet or large asteroid struck the earth, the impact would be devastating.
True, but “the impact would be devastating” is vague and abstract. It does
not communicate your meaning clearly and concretely. Now suppose you
add this:
To give you an idea how devastating the impact would be, it would be like all the
nuclear bombs in the world going off at one spot.
contrast
A statement of the
differences among two
or more people, events,
ideas, etc.
Now you have made the abstract specific and given us a sharp new slant
on things.
Like comparison, contrast can put an idea into concrete terms. Suppose
you want to make the point that a person’s chances of winning a state lottery are extremely low. You could say, “The odds, for example, of winning
a state lottery are an astronomical 7 million to 1.” The word “astronomical”
suggests that you consider 7 million to 1 long odds, but long in comparison
to what? One speaker offered this contrast:
The odds of picking the correct six-digit sequence in a typical state lottery are more
than 7 million to 1. In contrast, the odds of getting hit by lightning are only 2 million
to 1. The chances of being dealt a royal flush in a poker game are 650,000 to 1. The
odds of dying in an automobile accident are about 6,000 to 1. In other words, the
odds are much stronger that you will get hit by lightning or be killed in a car crash than
that you will win the jackpot in a state lottery.
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Now an abstract fact has been put into meaningful perspective. See if you
can do something similar in your informative speech.
Personalize Your Ideas
Listeners want to be entertained as they are being enlightened.4 Nothing
takes the edge off an informative speech more than an unbroken string of
facts and figures. And nothing enlivens a speech more than personal illustrations. Remember, people are interested in people. They react to stories,
not statistics. Whenever possible, you should try to personalize your ideas
and dramatize them in human terms.
Let’s say you are talking about autism, the developmental disability
marked by impaired communication and interaction skills. You would surely
note that the condition affects 1 in every 500 children, occurs four times
more frequently in males than in females, and is most prevalent among Caucasian males. You would also note that the symptoms of autism include
abnormal introversion, severely limited use of language, repetitive behaviors,
avoidance of eye contact, loss of emotional control, and passive responses
to affection.
But these are dry facts and figures. If you really want to get your audience involved, you will weave in some examples of children who suffer
from autism. One speaker began by telling about Sam, her autistic nephew:
My nephew Sam was the delight of our family when he was born, the first grandchild of my parents. He cooed and babbled, smiled at his mom and dad, grasped for
the playthings around his crib. At family dinners on Sunday, we took turns holding him
in our arms, feeding him, and singing him to sleep. He seemed like any normal infant
in a secure and loving home.
Then shortly before his second birthday we began to notice unusual behaviors.
Sam avoided looking us in the eye, did not seem interested in learning words, played
endlessly with the same toy, rocked back and forth in his chair for hours at a time, and
was easily frustrated. My sister took him to a specialist, who gave the dreaded diagnosis:
Sam was autistic.
personalize
To present one’s ideas in
human terms that relate
in some fashion to the
experience of the audience.
Class Activity
Popular nonfiction writing often provides helpful models
of informative discourse on
technical topics. Have each
student select an article of
interest from the medicine,
science, or business section
of Time or Newsweek—
ideally on the subject of the
student’s upcoming speech.
The student should prepare
a brief report (written and/or
oral) on the article, explaining how the writer uses the
techniques discussed in this
chapter to make the subject
clear and understandable to
ordinary readers.
During the body of the speech, the speaker mentioned Sam twice more
to illustrate different aspects of autism. Then, at the end of the speech, she
brought Sam’s story to a hopeful conclusion:
We have seen that autism is a very serious disorder whose causes are not well
understood and whose effects on families and the lives of the children themselves can
be devastating. But we have also seen that early diagnosis and early intervention can
help to modify and even turn around the symptoms of autism.
I am happy to say that Sam has benefited from such intervention. From the time
he was two, he has been taught “normal” behavior patterns through aggressive therapy. Now he is able to participate in his class at the local school. He is also more
responsive and affectionate at home. Sam continues to be our delight.
It was a powerful ending. By putting a human face on a familiar topic,
the speaker took autism out of the realm of statistics and medical jargon and
brought it home in personal terms. As one listener said afterward, “Because
of your speech, I will never see autism in the same way again.”
CD 1:VIDEO 14.5
View these excerpts from “Autism:
Heartbreak and Hope.”
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Sample Speech with Commentary
CD 2: FULL SPEECH
View “Acupuncture: New Uses for
an Ancient Remedy.”
The following classroom speech provides an excellent example of how to
apply the guidelines for informative speaking discussed in this chapter. As
you study the speech, notice how the speaker takes what could be a dry,
technical topic and makes it interesting. Pay special attention to how crisply
the speech is organized, to how the speaker uses well-chosen supporting
materials to develop her ideas, and to how she clarifies her ideas with
concrete language and personal examples.
Acupuncture: New Uses for an Ancient Remedy
Commentary
Speech
The speaker starts with an extended example that captures attention and interest. In
this case, the example works particularly
well because it is personally related to the
speaker and is richly detailed and vividly
drawn.
Six months ago, my 78-year-old grandmother was quickly losing her independence. Severe arthritis in both knees hampered
her ability to take care of herself. Shopping, getting around the
neighborhood, even walking down her front steps was becoming almost impossible. Pain medications helped somewhat,
but the side effects created their own problems.
As the speaker continues her opening example, she introduces the subject of her
speech by talking about her grandmother’s
positive experience with acupuncture.
Then her doctor suggested acupuncture. My grandmother
was skeptical at first, but she was willing to try just about anything. She did, and the results were miraculous. After six weeks,
her pain and stiffness were significantly reduced, she was able
to take care of her apartment again, she could get out on her
own to go shopping, to visit friends and family, and to do the
other things her arthritis had prevented in the past. Acupuncture restored her quality of life and her independence.
Mentioning her own experience with
acupuncture helps establish the speaker’s
credibility.
Here the speaker reinforces her credibility
and previews the main points to be discussed in the body of the speech. An explicit preview statement at the end of the
introduction is especially important when
speaking to inform.
My grandmother’s story is not unique. Performed for well
over 2,000 years in China and other parts of Asia, acupuncture
is becoming more and more popular in the U.S. and other
Western countries for one simple reason—it works. Impressed
by my grandmother’s experience, I began acupuncture treatments for my migraine headaches, and now my headaches are
completely gone.
Not surprisingly, I wanted to learn more about this treatment that produced such miraculous results for both my
grandmother and myself. Today I will share part of what I
have learned by explaining what happens when you receive
an acupuncture treatment, how acupuncture works, the kinds
of medical conditions that can be treated by acupuncture,
and the growing use of acupuncture in combination with
Western medical techniques. Let’s start by looking at a typical
acupuncture treatment.
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Now the speaker moves into her first main
point. The information in this and the following paragraph answers the audience’s
questions about what happens during an
acupuncture treatment.
Acupuncture is the insertion of needles into the skin to
achieve a balanced flow of energy, which in turn restores and
preserves health. To prevent any chance of contamination from
one person to another, acupuncturists in the U.S. use sterilized
needles that are individually packaged and are disposed of after a single use.
Knowing that many people are squeamish
about being poked with needles, the speaker
makes sure to explain that the needles used
in acupuncture are small and essentially
painless. Notice that the speaker did not
pass the needles around during her speech.
As mentioned in Chapter 13, putting visual
aids in the hands of the audience during a
speech is an almost certain recipe for disaster because listeners will end up paying
more attention to the visual aids than to the
speaker’s words.
I realize that the notion of having needles stuck into you
may seem frightening, but the needles are so thin that t